You may find that I'm a non-traditional reviewer. I will try to find something I like in every game, and my unofficial rankings will probably be higher than those of the real judges. Further, these reviews will form a kind of player's journal, since I'll write each one immediately (if possible) after playing the game. This means I might begin to get burnt out, and my reviews will become crankier, or maybe I'll become more ambivalent and one review will contradict the next. I know how hard I worked on my entry, and how hopeful I've been that judges will still enjoy it despite the flaws that keep surfacing the more I revisit it. Although this shouldn't prevent criticism where necessary, I hope it will at least temper it.

     My reviews may contain spoilers. I'll try not to do it, and I'll try to explain things without giving away a puzzle or the story, but if I can't, I can't. Just keep this in mind when reading my reviews. Also, the reviews are presented in the order in which the games were played, not in order by rankings.

     I plan to use a ranking system that will, with luck, keep me on track. Half-points (a luxury real judges don't have) will be used to indicate a game that could go either way, falling between the two categories. I may also skew a score up or down by a point or two (but I'll mention when I do), if it's something I enjoyed a little more or a little less (for whatever reason). The base will be what I think it should score (based on the explanations given below), without that additional skew. Also, as I'm not strictly bound by the 2-hour rule, I may play longer, or I may revise my scores after giving more thought to the game later. However, I hope to keep such activity under control, since in future years I may be a judge instead of an author (this could be good practice for that).

     ** 9 - A really great game; again, maybe not a perfect game, but one where the problems weren't a distraction. Great story, great plot pace; a setting I found especially appealing; fun to play, fun to read. I'm hoping to go generous with the 9's, as I intend to have fun playing the thirty-seven other games ahead of me!

     ** 8 - A really good game. One I enjoyed, but thought, "it might have been even better if..." This might also be a great game that just didn't hit me right; a genre I don't personally favor, for instance, but I was still able to appreciate the quality of the work. It's still a game I enjoyed playing.

     ** 7 - A good game, worthy of the competition, but could use some polishing. My hope is that most of what I play won't fall below this mark. This is a game I liked, but with noticeable typos, obvious omissions... just things to be improved upon for an updated release. This would be a game where these problems didn't really detract much from the experience for me, although I would expect the ratings of other reviewers to be less forgiving. This could also be a game that might have been a 6 or even a 5, except that the story seemed unexpectedly good, making up for the more serious problems.

     ** 6 - A good game with a few more problems. Maybe this means more typos than usual, some bugs in the game that might either render it unfinishable or begin to detract from the experience, or quirks that just seem misplaced or unintentional. Some instances of any of these things can still make it into a higher ranking for me (even a 10, if it's the right game), but this score would imply that the game seemed a little rushed and unpolished.

     ** 5 - This would be a game with quite a number of problems, or one I found frustrating to play. It could still be a game that I ultimately liked, just one that would put my entire ranking criteria under suspicion if I were to give a higher base. This would be a game that has potential - the author is on the right track - it just needs more work. Still, by allowing for a +/- 2 skew, I could still give a game in this category a pretty decent 7 if I really had a fondness for it, despite the problems.

     ** 4 - This game would be one in which I felt quite a bit of frustration, either with too many problems in the writing, the programming, the puzzles, the setting, or all of the above.

     ** 3 - This would be a more extreme case of what a "4" represents. This is a game where it's difficult or impossible to finish due to the problems; major bugs, glaring mistakes in the text; maybe even blatant attempts to make the player mad (without any indication that the emotion is helpful to the story). This is where it becomes more difficult to pick out the redeeming qualities in the game, because it isn't much fun to play.

     ** 2 - At this stage, I've found very little in your game to be excited about. It will have some kind of quality that sets it above a "1", but only by a small margin. Maybe something you wrote was especially clever, or I found the setting to be interesting even if the entire implementation was not. I will consider this just a step above "unplayable."

     ** 1 - Unplayable. I don't mean that I can't run it at all, because it wouldn't be fair for me to rank a game I can't even try. However, even though I can run it, I might as well have played with mud for two hours. I can find nothing of interest in the game, no reason or justification to bump it up to a "2" - basically, I strongly dislike the game.

     Again, these numbers and definitions refer to the BASE score (the score in the parenthesis, in the title section of each review). The "Unofficial Score" will often include a skew amount, added and/or subtracted from the base to present a final "how well did I enjoy it, above or below the base" score. To further clarify, a game indicating an Unofficial Score of 8.0 (7.0 base with +1.0 skew) falls at 7.0 by my scoring definitions. However, I enjoyed it enough to add a point, even though the final score doesn't mean it fits the "definition" of an 8.0 on my scale.

     Basically, the skews let me stick with a judging guideline (so my scores make sense when viewed as a group), while still allowing for my personal biases and preferences. Without the base definitions, there would be no consistency in my scores, and without the skew, there would be no flexibility.

     The introduction caught my interest. I played through about a minute of every competition game (well, most of them, anyway), and this was the one I was most interested in playing first, just based on the beginning. Several of the competition games seemed to be set in a futuristic Startrek-ish alien society, on a ship or a space station, and having played this game first and written this review before diving into the other games, I have to say I enjoyed this one, where I got a sense of cheesiness, a rush of campy sci-fi deja-vu, in some of the others I began.

     This is the story of a man on a mission, the woman who helps him, and a brewing war that isn't what you expect. The writing was very good, very enjoyable. The author was able to paint a vivid picture without excess text, and that's something I find enviable. As with any game, there were a few unimplemented bits of scenery ("x plants" and "x animals" in the garden, for instance, or "x architecture" in a spot or two). For the most part, the descriptions were brief enough that this wasn't a problem. I liked the story, and I did find several (if not all) of the ways to reach the "good" ending mentioned in the hints -- but I think my attempts to kiss her early on may have caused a starting deficit that I never overcame. I do plan to play through again, for that ending, because the story is entertaining enough to make it worthwhile.

     If I were casting a vote, I'd have gone over by about 15 minutes, hitting the two-hour mark close to the end, during the Orion outpost section. In retrospect, it doesn't seem like it was a difficult game, but I got caught up in three key spots that required checking about half the built-in hints for the appropriate topic. The hint system, by the way, was well done and a good idea. I had planned something similar (but with numeric codes to minimize the risk of spoilers even in the hint descriptions themselves) for my game, and just didn't have time to do it. At any rate, I was stuck in one spot because I didn't pay enough attention to the old man's table, a second time in regards to the map (I saw what I needed to see, but assumed it was simply an "x-marks-the-spot" for later), and finally, because I have a poor memory. Although I can't blame these snags on the author, it would have been nice to get some kind of in-story hint for at least the last one, and maybe the prior. Unless I missed it somehow, I had no way to review what I saw on the prayer cards, and I simply could not remember what I needed to know. But, that only meant I had to go through the entire hint chain. I'd have still used the clue on what to do upon arriving at the meeting. I know the glowing of the cube was a clue -- but I thought I needed to interact with the cube. I suspect other players may resort to the hints at the same point. But, that's end-game. It's the culmination of what you've learned. Although I don't think I'd have figured out the map no matter how long I gave thought to the problem (simply because I had been there and gone, without any indication that I might need to go back), I would probably have figured out the endgame puzzle after a while longer. I might have reloaded a save for another peek at the prayer cards, though.

     My only real complaint is in regards to the sudden death situations. I counted three, but I may simply have been on-track enough to avoid any others. I was ready to explore the Orion countryside, having failed to RTFM, and (unless I missed it), walking along with a partner who was likewise clueless about the risks. Still, "Undo" is my friend. The second time, I answered "yes" where I should have answered "no." It was no mistake -- I simply wanted to test the result, knowing already that I would be able to back up. I wasted the explosives, and was pleased to find it re-spawned where I found it. I didn't try, but I wonder if the same would have happened from my "no refunds" purchase if I had bought the wrong thing? My only other snag was in regards to the war card. I saw it, I read it, I just didn't know what it meant. I suspected time travel, not having any real insight into what was going on. Still, I vanished the Knowledge stone without even realizing it, and I simply didn't put enough significance on it at the end.

     Having played through only once (I'll go for the better ending after I make the rounds with the other entries), there seemed to be only minor plot holes. It was good to have a reference to McEllis earlier in the game. It prevented what might have seemed a tacked- on twist, at least to me. However, if contamination was underway, why would the armed natives have reacted poorly to the sight of us? Also, in the end, I'm told that McEllis disabled the network sats during the siege -- yet prior to "joining" the rally (presumably after the siege), I used it in my quarters. At least, I think I did.

     I've skewed this +0.5 for an even 9.0, because I love sci-fi, and the Star Trek feel works for me. If it had earned a half or even a full point less, I would probably still skew it to a 9, because it succeeds well in its genre and, well... I liked this game! This turned into a pretty lengthy review, so here's to hoping I have the stamina to do the same for the remainder of the entries. It's going to be a long six weeks!

     I became very accustomed to "You cannot do that" during my 15 minutes of play time. Inv? You cannot do that. I? Even better... You cannot do that because you're not yet a master (takes skill to check your inventory, I presume). Help! Ah, verbs, that's good. You gotta spell it out. Cool, he also implemented Save. Save. Er... why must the Gods be with me just to save my game? Woops, killed by a sneaky ninja. Sure, I'll play again. Ah, I can go east. Wait... no I can't. E. E. E. Well... Enter Shrine. Now we're getting somewhere. S. No? I have to Exit Shrine even though it's south? Well... okay, I'll go along with that. Cool, making progress. Woops, go back inside. Get that sword. W (out the window). Swim River. Should have known... but what's that ">20" mean? A score? A clue? Hmm. "Help" said I could chop. Yay! A makeshift bridge. Away west we go. Er... where am I now? Look. C'mon, ya could have just shown me the room description. An idol. Got it. Well, what else can I do here? Hmm.. Try this... try that. What's this, another ninja? And I'm dead again? Well crap. Play again? Might as well -- in for a penny, in for a pound, or so they say. Let's go back through the shrine, back to that "city to the east" I couldn't reach earlier. More of those ">20" messages. What's that all about? Okay, the city -- Still can't reach it. Hmm.... maybe if I try 10 times. E. E. E. E.... Whoa! I won! My score was 101 / 9 -- whatever that implies. I defeated the ninja with my negative-29 HP, and he had 0. I rock!

     I'm *really* not trying to be as critical as it sounds. I just can't help shaking my head at this game. I'll probably feel like a complete idiot later, when I learn that the game is a result of Mr. Panks's disability or mental illness. If that's the case, my apologies for this entire review. Still, it would have been nice if "quit" had let me out instead of assuming I wanted to finish the adventure.

     Well... I owe this game 2 hours. Paul spent about that much time writing it, so... well, it took 15 minutes to write this review, so that leaves me about an hour and a half to play around with the source code. I wonder if I can "objectify" the objects, and "verbify" the verbs? I'll consider it a challenge. QB has more power than you used here.

     FOLLOW-UP: I'm going to let the review stand, because it was my opinion at the time, but for the record, I feel like a big jerk for writing it. Writing games is something we do for fun. It's not fair of me at all to criticize that, nor discourage him -- especially as another IF-COMP participant myself. Paul, you submitted the game, it works, and I bet it was fun for you to do. You've probably hoped that the judges will enjoy it, and that you'll have a fair chance in the contest. Although I found playing the game frustrating, I really enjoyed playing with the source code, and I hope that if you get other reviews as negative as mine (or worse), it doesn't discourage you from improving upon what you do. I hope you continue to enjoy writing games. :)

     The game keeps moving, and I think that's much of its appeal. I was stuck trying to interact with the vehicle in the hangar, not giving enough merit to the gizmos. I was fed their purpose through hints, only to find myself in sudden death. I did figure a way out of one scenario, and it did seem to provide insight into the importance of the gizmos. When I needed them, I knew what to do with them. I was also stuck trying to enter the robot room, still placing more importance on the hangar and trying to deduce its purpose first. A hint helped me through that, and I had an easier time reaching the end. I didn't require a hint, but I did have to undo from sudden death a few times, to figure it out. The narrative there really had my heart pumping, as I engaged in the final battle. More sudden death in the escape, but that's what I get for dragging my feet.

     The game is nearly flawless (it takes nit-picking to find problems, and even then, it's probably just a problem of personal preference). Good for Paul, bad for the rest of us Comp authors. I'm sure a single play-through doesn't reveal a fraction of the detail and consistency. For instance, Paul doesn't forget that care must be taken when Austin helps his parents out of their situation, in describing them as fragile where super-strength is involved. Similes and metaphors abound. The graphics are a nice touch (although text formatting seemed to be weird in the proximity of the graphical words), and major kudos to your comic artist. I enjoyed the use of cut scenes, even though it seemed awkward to switch to a past tense for that purpose. I believe I understand the reason -- that's the "meanwhile..." section found in a comic -- it was just strange to switch from present to past.

     I may have to revise my aversion to "sudden death" situations. It does add to the challenge, and it would be a bigger issue if "undo" didn't exist. All three contest games I've played so far have offered premature endings, and I've really liked two of them. My past games have almost always done the same, so maybe I'm just starting to buy into the complaints I've received about that. My only other minor annoyance was that "Look Object" was not implemented. As a text-adventure player from way back, it's a hard habit for me to break. Still, "X Object" is shorter, and my unofficial score was not affected by this or by the sudden death situations. The only other glitch, provided it wasn't some mistake I made, was that in trying to have Emily obtain a gizmo from Austin (he was holding both, and I referred to it by its defining characteristic), I was told that he didn't have it. Switching to Austin and giving it to Emily worked fine.

     The only reason I didn't opt for a 9.5 or a 10 -- and it still could turn out that this game tops the competition once I've played through the others -- is that I'm holding out for a "wow, I can't believe it" game. It's difficult to disappoint me, and I suspect most of my comp ratings will sway to the high side. It's the same with movies. I like most movies; some are especially good, and every once in a while I see one and think "wow, that was incredible." Usually, it's the surprise twist or the uniqueness that I love -- Fight Club, Memento, The Usual Suspects -- these are some of my favorites. Luminous Horizon was a great game, and just based on my initial peek at most of the others, it could very easily follow the example set by number-two in the series, and take the top honors.

     Lastly, I want to comment on the dual-character implementation. I found it very easy to use, and a great change from the norm. From the info provided, I gather that the player was Sky in the first game, Earth in the second, making it perfect that both should take part in Luminous Horizon. Very well done. It was extra effort by the author, and it did not go unappreciated.

     Having just played another "super hero" game -- a shorter, more polished one -- I found myself wondering what my character's powers are. Maybe that's a big mystery to be uncovered later in the game, I don't know. One reference to "super speed" was given, but I found no way to really put this to good advantage. More than anything, I felt like a detective rather than a superhero -- and not a very good one, at that. I've always been a fan of puzzle games. Unfortunately, it seems I'm not very good at solving them. I got stuck on numerous occasions, including the introduction, resorting to as much help as the hint system would provide in several places.

     Although frustrated at my lack of progress, and by what I believe to be a spot where I may have saved my game in an unwinnable state, I liked the concept, and I liked the writing. Some British terms were lost on me -- I had to look up "lorry" to know for sure what it was. David has a great imagination, and the puzzles, dialogue, and descriptions seemed clever. My two chief complaints are that I felt too dependent upon the hints (maybe my fault), and that the game seemed to have been rushed to completion.

     You may skip the next paragraph if you're just a casual reader.

     Some of the problems I encountered were sentences with missing commas, other typos ("lessions" instead of "lessons"; a little "while" lie; Mirkhaven's description presumably missing a word or two; commonplace was written as two words; the name of the shop rings a "bill" -- unless that's a British variation, shouldn't it be "bell?"), some inconsistent descriptions (The Cat is asleep, but the room description says he's licking his paws and regarding me with malice; I found soap, searched again, and was told I already found the "marble"; I returned to my apartment but was then shown text regarding Bumble approaching the guards; a kid asks "have you got any real filth?" and the section is repeated), misinterpreted intentions (trying to talk to or show things to Bumble results in the guards responding instead), problems with the talk system (In the apartment, asking or talking to Smelly would give me the "fusty smell" message; sometimes, especially if auto-text would appear right after a conversation list, typing my choice number wouldn't work; "talk" would sometimes not work at all). Adrift's "Undo" seems to be a little quirky as well. I was able to get killed by The Cat, and any attempt to undo would see me dead again. In the presence of Mrs. Muggle, "X Muggle" says she's not there. Hitting the guards results in nothing (not even a flinch). Still, I offer this to be constructive, and hopefully to inspire an improved post-comp version. Having found at least fifteen problems in my own game just in the three days since it was submitted, I'm not trying to break the proverbial glass house by throwing the proverbial stone. :)

     Then, we have sudden death. :) The interesting thing here is, the author makes it a challenge. I found #1, #2, #3, and #9 in my two hours of adventuring, leaving plenty more yet to be discovered. That's a clever way to go about it, and except for not being unable to get "undo" to work correctly in some cases, I didn't even mind it. I kind of felt that it was my superhero's duty in life to fail and fail again. It seemed a less optimistic version of "Mystery Men", and I wonder if that was part of David's inspiration for the game?

     To sum it up, the game has quite a few problems, but the makings of a really good game are still there. I'd like to play it when a new-and-improved post-comp version comes out. If I make the rounds through the other games in time, I may return to this one even without an update. Even though I liked this game, it would fall between 6 and 7 on the scale I set for my rankings. Still, because I can see an epic in the making, and David's style is so enjoyable, I'm going to skew it up a full point.

     I've tried (and many of you probably do the same) to keep maps and notes while I play, for the purpose of referring back in a review. Running a transcript might be easier, but so far, I've just been using a notebook. I made more notes about this game than any of the previous four I've played. I liked this game, but there were definite problems. As a means of helping the author release an updated version, I'll go through the problems I found a little later in the review. I feel guilty for doing this, since as I identify problems in my own competition entry I imagine just how the other authors must feel, with each problem surfacing after our games are already in judges' hands. If I'm going to offer my thoughts, though, that's a part of it. As I go along in future reviews, this may become easier. I may even become snippy about it, but I hope not. I'm an amateur trying to give advice to authors much better than myself; but I digress.

     This is the story of a young drow girl, taken away to the castle of four interesting warlords. One day, she decides to leave the confines of her room and start the adventure that will lead to her destiny. This is set in motion by the warlords' plans to see how charming she can be. Ultimately, it doesn't seem that the warlords anticipated her actions at all, although I could be missing a story point in that regard.

     The layout of the castle is impressive, in that backtracking is made easier with a three- dimensional layout. I enjoyed exploring and making my own map, and despite the errors in text, it did feel immersive to me. Each NPC was given a distinct personality, and while others might dislike the descriptions prior to starting, I found it helpful to jot notes about each warlord in advance.

     Now, for the bugs/problems I found. Skip this next part (it's lengthy) if you're just a casual reader.

     "A emerald necklace" appears in inventory (should be "an"). I used the brush, then x'd it, and was told it had yet to be used. Prior to the game, Marsali climbed the bookshelf. I tried, and was told "the isn't important" (missed the noun). Same thing if I try to move it -- just missing the noun. On floor four is a dilapidated old book. X book results in "no book here." If I sit in either chair near Usi, I can't talk to him -- he's not there. "Inv" doesn't work for Inventory ("I" is easier, but it's a hard habit to break). When referencing "few pieces of parchment," the game would not disambiguate. One line in particular seemed weird -- "...scent of musty paper enters your nostrils as you enter" (maybe use "invades your nostrils as you enter," to avoid doubling up on the word "enter"). "There's too many books" -- should be "there are." Some areas assumed I would enter from one direction before the other. In particular, this seemed to happen for the fifth floor stairs and the fourth floor "cold" hallway. In essence, one room description referenced another, but I hadn't yet been there. Usi didn't want his own cup of tea, nor did anybody else, if I recall correctly. In events where "chat" leads to an ending (the one place you can get killed by saying the wrong thing to an overlord, and at the end), doing an "undo" leaves the chat options on-screen but the numbers are no longer active. Also regarding chat, it seemed whatever option I tried last would always remain, instead of getting a message such as "you have nothing more to ask." At one point, I was in too big a hurry and did "give ball to Eloy" when intending to try for Usi. Oddly enough, I was told that I couldn't give things "to the plain sword" (which I was carrying -- most likely the sword had an "eloy" adjective due to ownership). At the exit, the room text says I should just open the doors and walk west. However, following the suggestion ("open doors") doesn't work (only the "w" part is needed). There were quite a few places where plural objects were referred to singularly, such as "the runes and hieroglyphs isn't important" -- same with silk blankets. If Tads2 is anything like Hugo, there is probably an "is plural" identifier that takes care of properly formatting the default/generic messages. If my note is correct, text in the diary was "chose to reside here..." where it should have been "choose to..." (or maybe vice-versa -- my handwriting is sloppy). The term "a Mbizi's gloves" was used; same with trying to push "the Usi's cabinet." Again, Tads2 might have an identifier that lets you define a blank adjective instead of the default "the" in those cases -- speaking from how Hugo works. I had tried to open the shrunk (trunk?) to no avail, only to find from the walkthrough that it was necessary. After some trying, it turns out I only needed to look inside (even though it remains locked). In one room with a window -- maybe one of the bedrooms -- a "get all" actually obtained the window as well.

     The two strangest problems I found were a scoring bug, and a diary bug. I found the diary and read it, and (don't ask me how) I ended up with two copies of it in inventory. I could only interact with it from then on by using "all" (to get or drop). Luckily, I don't think it was required to finish the game; plus, I had already read it. The second is even stranger. At the end, I scored 125 out of a possible 100. I had actually hit 100 even before I went out to the "end" of the game. This is where a transcript would help much more than my vague recollection of the path I took through the game, but I don't have one to offer (sorry). It happened, though, I swear it!

     My only other concern was with all the unnecessary but obtainable objects. I quickly ran out of inventory space (being unaware, at the time, of the book bag close to the beginning), and I wasn't sure which items were okay to leave behind (even if temporarily), and which I might need at the next turn. It just seemed a few too many red herrings.

     I liked the multiple endings, although I'm kind of conflicted on this. Ordinarily, your path through the game would determine your ending. Different choices lead to a different ending. I understand that not all choices would have been available if certain things weren't accomplished, which was a nice touch. I don't know, though -- like I said, I'm conflicted. I generally don't like replaying a game unless there are clues and things I want to catch and understand better the second time around (sometimes just a different ending isn't enough), so it was nice to be able to see all possible endings without the added work. At the same time, it didn't feel to me as if all the endings really fit the course I had just taken. I don't know.

     I don't mean to turn every review into a criticism-sandwich, with a bug report nestled in between two slices of praise, but I did enjoy the game. That's what I meant when I said I'm a non-traditional reviewer. Nothing about this game was a waste of the two-and-a- half hours spent playing it. The problems did become a bit of a distraction at times, but I enjoyed the castle, the story, and the characters. It does need work, but I'm skewing it +1 from a base of 5.5 (for an "unofficial" score of 6.5), because I played half an hour longer than intended. I was entertained enough to keep going.

     FOLLOW-UP: I was disappointed to see that the very next day, this game was withdrawn from the competition. I already wrote the review, so at least in my mind, it was still a part of the contest. I would have emailed the author, but I couldn't locate an email address.

     However, it became obvious that this wasn't just a lack of originality, nor a colossal run of coincidences. This game is set in a well-known sci-fi franchise, using well-known references (by name, in some places), telling an "unseen" portion of that well-known story. This puts me in the strange position of rewarding a bonus point for bringing me into an entertaining sci-fi setting, and losing it again for questionable copyright status. I'll let the comment stand at that, though, and say nothing more of it.

     I'm going to have to curb my newfound tendency toward crankiness if I'm going to get through the remainder of the games. What I mean is, I'm starting to feel more like a beta tester and less like a fellow competition author trying to enjoy (and size-up) the competition. Lord only knows the kinds of complaints I'll get about my entry (my to-do list has already doubled), but with luck, I'll be criticized for typos, scenery with blank descriptions (sigh), unimplemented scenery, and not nearly enough conversational recognition. What I'm finding in games like "Escape from Auriga" includes quite a few typos, grammatical mistakes (everybody does this, but these just seem obvious), and more substantial bugs. Still, I continue to make notes, so if any of these weren't already reported, the author will have a better chance of releasing a post-competition update.

     I would have completed this game without any hints. I came very close, although with a total score of 95 from the possible 250. However, I had trouble using the auto-pilot, because I had already turned it on before performing the required action later. You have to perform the action, then turn it on. Except for this, I pride myself on winning without the walkthrough. As it turns out, the same thing was the source of my frustration in using the self-destruct system. The walkthrough does mention that, but I just never thought to try working it the "right" way.

     A longer bug list will follow, but the two of most importance are the two I'd like to mention separately. First, I found the access code puzzle to be pretty clever. I actually solved it. However, I didn't need to. Entering a blank number will get you in just as easily. I had actually carted my crewmates into the shuttle before finding the access code. Second -- and this might be more important -- it is possible to put the viewer inside the consoles in the flight control room. When you do this, and after taking it again, your ability to hold "general purpose" items is decreased by one. Do this five times and you won't be able to carry any of the extras.

     Additional problems are as follows: "...to fit it a wall..." ("into" a wall?); "state of shock and semi delirious" (something's just not quite right -- you can't be in a state of semi delirious, as "delirious" is an adjective); "...near one of the beds, sends a chill..." (no need for that comma); "...you can't help not realize the irony..." (just reword it); "...as if awaken from sleep..." (ditto); "...there is 2 of them in the middle..." (although it's doubtful I have much room to talk, this segment is bad in three ways -- try "...two of them are in the middle..." instead); "...normally used keep handy..." (missing word, maybe?); "x crates" in hangar results in "you can't see any such thing."; "...prepare for all available craft for emergency..." (drop the first "for" and you're in good shape); "It release the..." (releases?). Also, the hints.txt and walkthrough.txt appeared to be the same document.

     The walkthrough (which I used at the very end) does cover the additional ways to earn the extra points. I was impressed that the game wasn't overly difficult, but that a deeper challenge exists. I couldn't figure out how I was meant to battle the creatures with only three bullets! I'm going to get through as many competition games as I can, but this might merit a replay at a later date. Overall, this was a fun game. Sudden death was a way of life, but I'm starting to get used to it.

     FOLLOW-UP: Once again, I play a game, and then it drops out; this time, disqualification because of rule #1. But, I'll go ahead and post this review when the time comes. I feel like a heel, though, because I mentioned the movie connection. Maybe others did, as well; it wasn't my intention to eliminate the competition.

     I found the game world very interesting, very fun to explore, and something unique at this point in the competition. It was very trippy, at times, but I liked that. I found one fatal error ("get gnostical" from the bookshelf at the beginning will result in a Frotz "illegal object" error, and the game crashes). Other than that, and discounting the problems in the writing, my chief issues are with playability.

     I think you have to distinguish between ordinary puzzle-fests, and games intended for the competition. It's something I'll have to keep in my mind for future competitions, but this game really illustrated the problem. The game world was big, the challenges were plenty, and you can put the game in unwinnable states that require replays. Ordinarily, maybe that's not so bad. But when you're trying to stick to a two-hour rule (yeah, yeah, I'm not officially judging -- I could take however long I need, but still...), these things lead to frustration. In particular, every once in a while, various incarnations of an item-stealing statue will appear. It's actually very well done, and the text is varied each time. However, it turns out that you really do need that pickaxe more than once. I can start over from a prior save (heeding the warning from the text file), but I'm beginning to realize it's just not much fun to play through the same parts of a game when the only reward is to get un- stuck. If I didn't have 30 games still to play, this might not bother me. I didn't even need the walkthrough until Part 3, and then I just kind of kept referring to it because I lost my sense of purpose. It was fun to explore -- I loved the world Algol has created -- I just felt confused.

     I noticed something in this game, and in the last ("Escape from Auriga") that struck me as odd. Maybe it's something particular to Inform or the Frotz interpreter, but attempts to "Get All" will cycle through every reachable object: windows, doors, walls, floor, statues... anything. Again, this might not be the author's fault, it's hard to say. I know that in Hugo, you simply make the object "exclude_from_all." Something similar could probably be done here. Otherwise, crafty use of "get all" will identify everything you see, often giving clues where clues shouldn't have been.

     I liked it, yet it frustrated me. I didn't beat it, although I might have, if not for that dastardly statue. I added one full point for entertaining me with such an imaginative game world, and I removed half a point because it is so easy to render unwinnable. That's a final score of 6.5. I can tell that the author put a lot of work into it, and I hope it does well in the competition. I didn't get to see any of the three endings (assuming the three paths outlined in the walkthrough lead to three separate endings), but I would like to. This is another I'll have to come back to later, especially if the author releases an updated version.

     Does anybody have any idea what the title means, and in what way it references the game? I sure couldn't figure it out, but I must be missing something.

     My only real "complaint" is that the game was so engaging -- right from the start, especially -- that I hoped for a little more from the ending. The 2003 film of the same name (John Cusack, Ray Liotta, etc) kept coming to mind, even though the plots are nothing alike. Through the game, I found myself trying to guess the surprise twist concerning my own identity. I thought maybe the "people I work for" were criminals, and I had commandeered the craft. When clues made that unlikely, I thought maybe I was an alien, and this was a pre-industrial Earth I found myself visiting. It's a definite credit to the game that these thoughts crossed my mind. With text that didn't require repeated note-taking on every typo and grammatical problem (for purposes of offering a bug report, I mean), the game flowed quite smoothly. Kudos to Dave, and to his beta testers. This game was an ideal entry in the competition, and one I thoroughly enjoyed.

     Wow... when most of the review isn't a bug report, it's a pretty brief review!

     This is another nearly flawless game. I made a short list of small things to improve, but this is more nitpicking than an actual bug report. I enjoyed this game, even though it wasn't my first choice in genres. The writing is very vivid, and I do enjoy descriptive nature scenes. Mingsheng earns a bonus half-point for expanding this to include "listen" and "smell" everywhere, and because the goal of the game was to improve the main character by what was learned. I was stuck only twice, resorting to the walkthrough. The first time, I had the right idea, but abandoned the line of reasoning when it didn't work. I overlooked the clue indicating that statues can be referred to by "right" and "left" designations. The second time was again my own lack of attention. I abandoned the box without a further glance, after obtaining what was inside. I shouldn't have.

     As bugs go, these are minor. If attempting to unlock the gate, I was asked the traditional "with what?" question. Having nothing in inventory that might present a solution, I attempted to head south instead. The resulting "(first taking the south)" assumed I was answering the question instead of pursuing a different course of action. Another minor thing: "x flies" at the lake sees no such thing. I found green moss in one location. An attempt to "get moss" actually revealed the red moss as being nearby, too. Finally -- and again, a real nit-pick -- the vine is still dry even after taking a trip along the sea.

     What puts this game above others of a similar type is that the author seems to know history and legend well enough to weave it into the game. As much as I enjoy science fiction, what you generally find in sci-fi is that nothing is based on research; very little requires a firm knowledge in anything except wild speculation. In a game like Mingsheng, you really have to give credit for putting real knowledge to work.

     I found no ways to put the game into an unwinnable state, although I thought (at first) that losing my items to the rough sea was one. But, not only does the author provide for this, it actually presents a clue for a later puzzle. This was very well done. Actually, every puzzle in the game was well done, and because these challenges drive the story instead of merely interfering with your progress, it's difficult to consider any of it as arbitrary. I believe that this game illustrates the right way to introduce puzzles. Give them a point for existing. Put some logic and purpose behind it. This game does that.

     With the skew, Mingsheng gets an unofficial 9.0 from me. It is very well written, the puzzles are good and not overly obscure, the story presents a journey of self-growth for the main character, and it was a nice setting to explore. Well done, Deane.

     FOLLOW-UP: Browsing the official game list at www.ifcomp.org today (10-11-2004) turned up an interesting thing. I don't know if it's a recent change, or if I just didn't notice before, but this game is credited to Rexx Magnus. I've updated the review title to show this. And, to revise my closing comment, Well done, Rexx!

     Did I mention that it's difficult? I did pretty well for a while, but the game is so layered that one object leads to three more, which lead to three more, and so on. As a player, you have to really dig deep or you'll miss pieces of the puzzle that are vital to the solution. As I became hopelessly stuck, I started referring to the built-in walkthrough more and more.

     To get the "bug report" out of the way, I didn't find much. The game was involving enough, though, that I scarcely looked for any problems. Trying to remove the yarmulke results in "you're not wearing it." The word "grow" is missing its "s" in the line that contains "A morello tree grow before..."

     This is the first game I've given a negative skew without one to compensate in the other direction. It ranks highly on my scale, because it's put together very well. The detail in "Gamlet" is amazing, from the sounds outside the windows to the custom responses when attempting to needlessly interact with various things. It skews down (but only a little) because I found it overly difficult; also, because I couldn't help but think the game was somehow giving the middle finger to someone (or multiple someones) disliked by the author, or to me as the player, or to the IF community in general. I'm sure it will all make more sense to somebody else.

     FOLLOW-UP: Early discussion in rec.games.int-fiction (what happened to waiting until the end of the judging period? Oh well) mentions the "ABOUT" text for the game. I realized I hadn't even tried that, so as a follow-up, I did. It's entertaining, and it does explain a little more about the game. At the same time, I was unable to decide what it really means about the author, the characters, and the story. Decide for yourself.

     I have tried to grow as an IF author, and I recognize now that sometimes a puzzle that seems completely straightforward and obvious to the author can seem impossibly difficult to a player. The puzzles in "Stack Overflow" aren't bad, they're just obscure. If you provide a puzzle, it's vital to offer clues. At times in this game, I didn't even realize I was facing a puzzle at all, nor would I have known to poke around enough to solve it. The puzzle regarding the table and the elevator comes to mind. Figuring out what to do with the cube (after feeling smug at figuring out how to use the hammer) is another. Regarding the cube, did I miss a hint? I only solved it with the help of the built-in hint system. Nothing in the game gave me any indication whatsoever that a made-up verb was required. I won't disregard the possibility that I'm just not observant enough to see it, but still, if not for the shove forward, I'd probably have been stuck there forever.

     This is the story of a mild-mannered (well, the game doesn't say he is; I just filled in the blank based on his need for inspiration before becoming destructive) research worker, late for work, abducted by aliens. Actually, I'm not too clear on that. He was either abducted by government agents and left to stew alone in a small room, or else the aliens are somewhat like government agents. At any rate, it was nice of them to leave a method of escape available for my use. Then again, my role to them does become clear later in the game, so it was probably intentional.

     I have the impression that the author's native language isn't English (the name, the email address, the obvious grammatical mistakes). I'm not counting off for that, because I can't claim to know more than a few useful words in any other language. Still, the problems in "Stack Overflow" go beyond the literary. Skip the next paragraph if you have no interest in this bug report.

     At the beginning, the "help" command says I need no help. Fortunately, I did solve the intro on my own, but I'm the best judge at whether or not I'm stuck. The "walkthru" command made reference to a revolutionary hint system, yet it's not actually available until after the intro. My character works in research on the SNUTFIX project -- so why would he casually disregard the project as meaningless ("...whatever that means...") when reading the SNUTFIX papers? It seems there are two papers (the papers from the folder, and some other note I never actually saw) at the beginning -- the second being exposed as existing when trying to look at the paper. The only way to use the tape player is to "turn player on" -- implementing "play tape" and "push play" and others might be a nice addition. At one point, my character reverts to hillbilly mode, when I "...ain't got any knowledge..." The gate that ultimately leads to the escape pod doesn't exist. What I mean is, no attempts to reference it with X or Open or whatever will show it. Further, you cannot leave the gate unless you "use" the cube in the same way you did to arrive here (the eastern exit is missing). When taking random papers from the research room, put one into the scanner followed by "take paper" will not only generate another one, but it will cycle through all inventory as if trying to disambiguate (you just have to try it to see what I mean). Oh, one other. After the title screen is (finally) shown, the walls continue to appear in the description, but attempts to interact with them again says they don't exist.

     Despite the problems, I enjoyed playing the game. I really think some of the puzzles were obscure enough to be unrecognizable as puzzles. I got stuck (even with the walkthough -- but that's my fault, not the author's) close to the end. The puzzle with the manual, buttons, dials and switches, I really liked. It just didn't occur to me to make the manual more scanner-friendly. Following the walkthrough then, I didn't quite understand the puzzle. I almost gave up and closed the game, but I really wanted to make it to the end. I gave a closer inspection to what was scanned from those pages. This is where using the walkthrough actually held me up a little. I just need to read and understand the pages to get the clues I needed.

     As I play more of the competition entries, I'm finding it harder to rank them. Multiple games are getting the same score, but for different reasons. I based "Stack Overflow" at a 6.0, not because of the writing or even the story, but because I think it would require telepathy to solve. I offer it a +0.5 skew (for a final score of 6.5) because I'm still a sucker for sci-fi. One word of advice to the author, though. If the point of your game is to explore the space station, it's self-defeating to follow a room description with "why oh why, are you stuck in such a boring place?" Also, I almost gave up before reaching the end, but your game kept me entertained and guessing enough to push forward. It's good that you offer multiple ending possibilities, but I guess I was just a little disappointed. I ended the game without knowing what my role as a research worker plays in the events I just experienced (if any). But maybe that's what you intended.

     After the first two hours, I would have based the game at 9.5. If I were judging, I'd have probably cast a flat 9.0 based on what I played. However, not being bound by that, I plunged forward without making that mark, and realized some important things about this game. You can get stuck. Perhaps there are really clever, obscure ways to get unstuck (although, to be honest, I'm not so sure), but you'll find numerous ways to get stuck. Mainly, it's a matter of trying one thing before you're supposed to. You can do it -- the game lets you -- but you have no way back. To summarize these (so perhaps I can be corrected, or else they can be fixed in an updated): What's in the mail gets broken if another package is delivered before you obtain the first. On a whim, I tried an action that (as it turns out) allowed me to get my sister's ID -- however, I hadn't visited the patient in the hospital, and I could find no way then to "clean" the cans of paint. Also, the same thing seemed to make it impossible to obtain the mailbox key. I made my way through the puzzle which leads to the tug-of-war session, north again into the shower for that bit, only to find out later that I couldn't return and I needed something I had no way of obtaining previously. Giving the remote to Wesley will have it away for repair for two weeks -- presumably, I won't be able to wait that long. Being thrown in jail ultimately leads to death, with no way out. In several places, I saved before moving forward. I had to restart from almost the beginning two times, and from earlier says two or three times more. This was probably the most frustrating part of the game, and the primary reason Kurusu City gets an 8.5 base score.

     However, I'm skewing it a full point for being so entertaining. I mean, I've played other games in the competition that I didn't want to finish even without having to restart a prior save. Plus, it's sci-fi done well. The ending notes were a nice touch. I touched on a couple things as an "after you finish" portion of the FAQ for my game, but I think it would have been a good idea to go into more detail about the evolution of the game, the way Kevin does. It made for an added bonus, and a bigger sense of accomplishment.

     Even with the hints, the game was hard! To some extent, I'm glad the hints weren't more specific. I remembered a recent newsgroup post about updated hints, and even though I couldn't find it at first (was the message cancelled?), I found it using Google Groups. I thought Outlook Express has an option for ROT13 decoding, but I couldn't find that either, so I wrote a quickie QB program to do it. A question to the author, though: how is Neeny in two places at the same time? The rest of the game makes sense, in that it seems to follow consistent logic. But for the life of me, I couldn't figure that one out.

     As for bugs, I only found minor ones (all unwinnable states aside). You can learn the name of the woman in the arcade before you've actually been introduced, simply by telling her about certain things (the description references her by name). When textbooks appear in the cylinder, the listing appears twice. At one point, probably near the beginning, an attempt to interact with the mirror (get, open, etc) leaves the word "mirror" out of the resulting "you can't" messages. Trying to "put hand in red paint" tells me "you don't even have yourself." Trying to take the note from the catalog machine tells me I can't take the catalog machine itself (similar things happened with other "components" of larger items). But, for every small bug, something surprising was implemented. For instance, the nurse says "don't follow me" -- but you can actually try it, and you won't get the traditional "nothing happens." The random video game names are a nice touch. At one point, I "heard" the soundtrack to the movie "When Help Collides" (an IF-COMP entry in 2002?) playing.

     To recap: Difficult. Use multiple saves. Good story. Very fun. Well written. It overshoots the two hour mark, but at this point, it's my marginal favorite.

     The game is further crippled by the lack of an "undo" and the lack of "save" (which is going to be a future feature in the LIFE engine, says the readme). I've dabbled in writing parsers too, and after working with Hugo, I can see where I took the wrong approach to it in my attempts. Those efforts could have (and would have) been better if I knew then what I know now, about parsing. I think Exige takes the wrong approach, too. I feel bad for criticizing the parser, especially since I can tell from the readme that Patrick is very proud of it, but I hope this is constructive, not deterring (the same things were said to me about mine). Actually, this parser is a little better than my couple of attempts, but it still falls flat in several areas.

     First, there are no "extra" verbs. What I mean is, it's nice when you try to eat something -- even if nothing in the entire game is edible -- to at least get the obligatory "you can't eat that" or similar message. I also found verb recognition in general to be frustrating at times. "Insert X into Y" didn't seem to work, where "Put X in Y" did. It also seemed that some verbs were only "active" in the spot where they're used; I could be wrong, but that's how it seemed. Implementation of "in" and "out" (as well as cardinal directions for entry and exit) would be nice, because "Go X" (where X is a room or object) is a little antiquated. A "restart" would be a nice feature.

     As for bugs, Exige fares better than some prior examples. I received two crash reports, which I'll email to you (fortunately, your built-in error trapping doesn't cause the program to exit). First, the description of the notebook says it's on the desk, whether it still rests there or not. If you are holding the notebook and the note, then drop the note, you won't be able to read the notebook unless you leave the room. It wasn't obvious enough that I couldn't actually "see" the mouse. I knew what I needed to do with it, and I was getting frustrated that I couldn't interact with it. Maybe a simple tip here would help: "You can hear it squeaking, but it seems to be hiding somewhere." Something like that might have worked for me. Also, it seems there were no clues at all about what to do with Tiberius, aside from directing his movements (ala the journal entry). Even this, though, I expected to be able to get him to "follow" me by directing him to do so, and that failing, directions have to be fully spelled to work (which makes sense for Tiberius's hearing, but not so much sense in the scope of forming a puzzle). I had to resort to the walkthrough in both places (figuring out how to get started with the mouse, and figuring out what to do with Tiberius). Additional clues in the notebook might have been handy, unless another clue exists and I simply missed it (a score of 138 suggests I missed at least a few things). Perhaps something to the effect that Tiberius has been trained to locate missing objects (sorry, probably a big spoiler there). And for that purpose, "find" as a synonym for "get" might have helped.

     Overall, the game wasn't too large, and it wasn't too difficult. The general plot is beginning to seem a little familiar, though (I wonder how many more spaceships or I'll be escaping from, in the remaining entries). To showcase a custom engine, something more unexpected might have been a better choice. Still, aside from having to close and restart the game a couple times after either dying or losing, it does seem pretty solid. Starting over would have been more of a frustration if it had been a bigger game. Everything is pretty straightforward, so it wasn't hard to just retrace the same path to catch up again.

     I can see where the author is going with the live gameplay components, but the display refresh thing is a real distraction. I think it will take some improvements to this, and to the parser, plus a game module where these live components are more integral to the story, to really bring out these advantages. As it stands, nothing in "Getting Back To Sleep" was really enhanced by the live components. It will be nice to see another game putting these advantages to better use.

     As a base, I scored this game 6.5. It falls in the middle of 6 and 7, because it could really go either way. I skewed it up a full point (for a 7.5 total) because the custom engine shows promise. It isn't quite there yet (please PLEASE get "save" and "undo" added, and see about that flickering display thing), but I think it can be improved. Plus, where "Ninja" makes no attempt at all, it's easy to see that a lot of work went into the LIFE engine just to bring it to this point. I suspect typical scores may fall in lower ranges, but since I've been in this spot before, I've tried to remain open-minded. Overall, it's the makings of a good engine, presenting a fairly solid game.

     The first of these did catch me by surprise. As I discovered something interesting in the garage, the following confrontation was unexpected. The second twist, which ends the game (mild spoilers here) wasn't so unexpected. In fact, I made the connection even before finding the second clue inside the asbestos house. The second clue just confirmed it. Still, it's an entertaining story, a solid game, and by my scale that's a well-deserved 8.

     Now, the game leaves several questions unanswered (even with the hint to ask Agent Smith). In light of the ending, why would the note have appeared in evidence at all? The gun, yes, the brick, yes... but the note was counter-productive to all motives but my own. Why was the door to the 24/7 convenience store locked? Was there any food to be found in the game, or was that just a time limit for completing it?

     Skip this paragraph if you have no interest in the bug report. None of these are significant in completing the game -- just things the author might be interested in improving. It seems that the "toilet" scenery appears twice in the men's bathroom, not at all in the women's. A very similar bug almost made it into the final version of my own competition entry (and in my case, it would have made it almost impossible to complete). Here, it's just a quirk. One bathroom says no toilet exists, the other asks you to disambiguate between the toilet and the toilet. The noun "cycles" for the motorcycles would have been a nice touch (although 'bikes" worked fine). The word "inv" didn't work for inventory (this must be a TADS default). I dropped the bag before I left the hotel, yet the cops still accused me of having it. At the end, I'm allowed to leave with the brick (in fact, they didn't ask for any of the evidence back). I spent a little time trying to tell the driver where I wanted to go (because I knew) -- you've implemented "Say 'whatever'" so maybe that and "tell driver (about) blah blah blah" might make good additions. "You're" should be "your" in the line "You're head is starting to spin..." I use HTML TADS 3.0c (for Windows), and unless I changed it and simply don't remember, my default text font is black (probably black font, white background). This caused my input to appear invisible for the game, until I changed it. These things are all pretty minor, though.

     I found the game entertaining and fun to play. I liked that "verbose" was on by default (not sure why -- having it off doesn't bother me in other games). I liked the use of colors, and the ASCII title was pretty slick. My cellmate's profanity was funny, though excessive. Most of the puzzles weren't too difficult. The author did a good job putting thought into his game. The intent was to entertain the player with a good story, not just throw together some puzzles to provide a challenge. I think he went the right direction.

     This is one of those games, though, where you know your PC is being foolish, but you also can't continue unless you allow him to be. I really didn't want to leave the hotel carrying the weapon I found. That's why I left the bag behind, but the plot is at a standstill unless you do. I'd have rather found a phone, called an ambulance (and the police), and waited until help arrived. This is where, despite a good story, the plot foundation gets a little thin. Oh well. I still enjoyed it; all's well that ends well.

     I'm not sure what it is about this game that I liked so well, but taken as a whole, I found it a wonderful experience to play (even if I did get stuck down in the dungeon -- even that was fun). Maybe it's the writing, especially in the introduction. Maybe it's because I started playing Dungeons and Dragons with friends just a couple of months ago (yeah yeah, I guess I'm a big nerd), for the first time since a brief encounter with it over twenty years earlier. Maybe it's because the total flip-flop from black-on-white to white-on- black between the castle and the dungeon impressed me. Maybe it's because of the cool castle and dungeon layouts. Maybe it was just the right kind of game at the right time in my play list. It isn't even really a puzzle-based game, but using spells can be a puzzle in itself. It isn't a perfect game, either; it has its share of periodic typos.

     It's becoming increasingly difficult for me to pick a favorite game -- or even a top three (I kind of dread casting my Miss Congeniality vote) -- but this one is a strong contender. Somebody else could have written this game and completely botched it, making it not only dull but downright messy. Mr. Rheaume does a fantastic job of making the game not only playable (and re-playable), but highly entertaining to boot!

     The hints say that in my situation, I couldn't have left the dungeon. With only one mage standing (I pride myself on defeating at least one of them), I kept hoping for some way out of my situation. But no. She did appear, but she vanished just as quickly. Still, it was FUN. I'll play this game again, I'm sure. It's the kind of game that actually makes me want to play more and discover better tactics. My crowning achievment was when I conjured the dead body of a recently deceased mage in time to loot the corpse. I didn't expect it to work, but it did!

     I didn't find any real bugs (except maybe that I can read books being carried by other mages if I refer to "book" and then disambiguate), but with so much going on in the game, I did find typos. The description for the east guest wing is missing a space after the period in "...trophies on the wall.The hall..." Near that, "an golden orb" is mentioned. Looking at Loge puts an "a" in place of "he" in the line that reads "...speak of the time a bested..." In the dungeon (grid coord 5,5), something found and referenced as being "west" is actually to the east. From there, the line "...to cell door is east" appears. A space is needed between "at" and "the" in "...obsidian blade atthe stone gargoyle..." In the line containing "...Loge sends handfull..." an "a" should appear after Loge, and "handful" needs only one "l". "Cold" should be "could" in the line "...she cold free her people..." Although it isn't a typo, if you try to conjure a book and disambiguate to the "wealth" book, a message says that with so many books here, it would take forever (seems to be piggy-backing off normal "get" messages).

     I intended to base this game at 9.0 with a +0.5 skew, because I wanted to save the ultimate score for the game that totally wows me. This one comes dangerously close, though. It's not even sci-fi, but I couldn't justify giving a lesser skew for a game I think deserves a high mark. So, with a full point skew (for being so well-designed, fun, and original among other IF games), it gets an unofficial 10 from me. It's probably too early to predict, especially when I'm not even half-way through the entries, but I'll be very disappointed if "Magocracy" doesn't land a spot in the final top three.

     As a detective sent to investigate a murder, you will question suspects, search for evidence, and ultimately solve the case. Fortunately, the clues become obvious. You won't be relying strictly on the PC to explain these realizations to you, because the pieces will come together even before the detective makes an entry in the notebook. It's a short mystery, with no real twists (it would have been interesting if the culprit had been someone else, requiring another layer of clues of deduce that the likely suspect couldn't have done it, but someone else had a strong motive). Still, very enjoyable, and the lack of complications makes it clearly playable in two hours.

     The writing is great, and the story is interesting. I found no ways to put the game into an unwinnable state (even when bumbling around after the culprit already escaped). When I obtained the 25-point ending, a few quick UNDOs put me in a spot to solve for full points (I knew what I needed to do; I just had to think a moment to figure it out). Because of a comment from the author, I suspect much of the setting and some of the characters are indeed based on reality; it would be even more enjoyable to those in-the-know.

     The only bug report I can make is that an "s" is missing on "joins" in the line "...takes off and join..." and attempting to move the corpse says it's fixed in place (maybe it can't be moved because it's crime scene evidence instead). Well, it would also be nice to have "centerfold" as a synonym for "centrefold", but that's really a nit-pick.

     In summary, "Murder at the Aero Club" is a short, nearly flawless game. It really drives home the fact that this is a contest meant for shorter games -- something many of us authors tend to forget when our personal brainchildren spill over the edges of what's reasonably playable in two hours. This is a solid 9.0 with no skew. I would pop for +0.5 if it was "Murder at the Spaceport", with all the adjustments to character descriptions that it implies -- but that's just me. :)

     The back story is very imaginative. I read everything I could find, including each entry in the law book (whew). That alone is highly entertaining. One premature ending alludes to something which I thought might provide an eventual twist (and I was right), which kept me pushing forward despite feeling more and more stuck. The built-in hints became a big help, although I had to resort to the walkthrough for certain puzzles when no applicable clues were available. It's a very challenging game, with plenty of puzzles and red herrings to keep a player guessing for a long time (without clues and the walkthrough). It's another that pushes the limits of what's possible in just two hours (I spent three hours, trying to go easy on the hints).

     The game is well-designed, well-written, and fun. I didn't get the full score (even with a good ending), so I guess some things went undone and unanswered. For instance, what really happened to the other person at the picnic, or is the assumption the only answer? Why does a hermit (with criminal views and opinions, no less) live so close to the center of activity? The story is interesting enough that these questions come up. Although I won't name examples, I've played some games before that gave me no reason to further ponder the unanswered mysteries of the game's story.

     The additional end notes provided by the author are an added bonus. I loaded prior saves and tried a few (but not all) of the suggestions, for some interesting results. The game is about as flawless as they come (although at this point, I think I'm just not watching for problems to the extent that I did at first). I saw "...cirle or sphere..." at one point (circle is missing its second "c"), and that's about it. Bonus interaction abounds: you can draw on various things, you can wrap things around other things even though it doesn't help, some puzzles have multiple solutions, you can push objects around, the NPCs can talk about quite a number of things, and you can find objects which really have no importance. It's great to have so much free interaction, but at the same time, it tends to obscure what's really important.

     I was tempted to rate a little lower because of the difficulty, but this isn't the first difficult (and lengthy) game in the competition to receive a high mark from me. On my scale it's a 9.0, regardless of the numerous 9's (and higher) I've already given. I enjoyed it, it's well- written, the story is unique, and it even has a plot twist. Without a skew, that's still a very high mark.

     I'm either becoming less inclined to spot typos, errors, and problems, or COMP04.Z5 has rolled a list for me that simply continues to improve in quality. For the first time, I have absolutely no technical criticism. In part, this is probably because the game drives you forward to the next task and the next. Random experimentation isn't quite as necessary. Early on, I did try a few things with unimplemented objects, but I made no notes and found that this didn't detract from the game in any way. That's not to say this isn't a puzzle game -- it certainly is -- just that the puzzles are neither difficult nor illogical. At times, it felt like a series of errands, but that's okay. For the second time, I finished one of the competition games with no hints and without even a frustrated glance at the walkthrough.

     Baghdad, 2026. Despite the easy setup, "Who Created That Monster?" takes an unexpected direction. Sci-fi is given a cursory nod, but the author's agenda seems to be... well, you just have to play it to get the point. Suffice it to say, you have to be inanely dense (or in too big a hurry) to miss the message (sorry, to anybody who may have drawn different conclusions than I did). Ultimately, Bobbie Joe Lavoro plays his (her?) part in answering the title question. It all comes together like clockwork: the new threat just waiting to be discovered, a shift in blame, and international appreciation for being a good little puppet. While Bobbie does the fist-pump of triumph, somewhere, important people are probably pointing, smirking, sharing a little wink-wink, nudge-nudge.

     I'm curious to find out if this author entered the contest under a pseudonym.

     This is where things get tricky for me in scoring this game. This isn't my "wow" game (although it's probably going to be for others), so it's not a 10 for me. A 9.0 would mean I liked almost everything about it, but the plot (rather, the "point" of the game) seems to put me at odds with the author. Basing it lower than an 8.0 does the game an injustice, by my scoring system. It's a great game (considered strictly AS a game), but in a "genre I don't personally favor" (see the info about my 8.0 base) -- the genre being global political satire. It's not that I'm close-minded; I just [SNIP]. (Several lines of ranting, none of which have any bearing on the game or the review, were removed in a follow-up edit.)

     Then again, I could be reading way too much into the author's message. It's a thought- provoking game, and one that's sure to strike a chord, be it positive or negative, with many judges. I'll take it as purely entertaining, and skew it +1.0 for being fun, solid, multi-layered, and nearly (if not entirely) flawless.

     Depending on how frustrated you get, this may or may not be an easy game. It's the third I solved without hints or a walkthrough, so maybe my adventure-muscle is getting a little stronger than it was before. Anyway, I received one good ending after thirty minutes, did an undo to follow the tip for the second ending (five minutes), then went through from the start using the walkthrough (another five minutes) just to see if I missed anything else. The walkthrough illustrates that this game has multiple paths to a solution (because what I did was a little different), even though it's all effectively the same result.

     With only a brief amount of play, I had high hopes that "Bellclap" was going to be that "wow" game I've been hoping for. When the clouds were parted and that one star was visible, I was really convinced that the game was about to take off for a surprise twist. I could just imagine what was coming next -- Bellclap the shepherd, with a clear invitation to Bethlehem. In fact, I was already thinking of ways to assert my clever conclusion into the forthcoming review, when moments later, I won.

     It's a short but solid game, with very few flaws (I'll list what I found momentarily). With a little more thought, the concept could have been something more than it is. It's a good game -- I don't mean to imply otherwise -- but the three-layered gameplay could have been extended into a longer story. Even a double- or triple-sized game would have fit within the two-hour guideline, and the premise could have been put to even better use. My notes are shorter for this game than for any other so far, and the map I started wasn't necessary after all. It's a three-room game.

     I found a few glitches, but nothing to dent the rating. When returning to the temple from above, the room description still indicates that Bellclap entered through the southern archway. Bellclap can hit himself with the hammer, to no ill effect. In regards to the task necessary for the ideal ending, the command that works "...to hatch" doesn't work "...to roof" -- I considered the hatch the splinters of broken wood, not the opening itself.

     The "about" command (darn me for not thinking to add an "about" verb to my entry) lists quite a few beta testers, and it shows. On my scale, it's an 8.0 base -- a good game, I just wish it had continued for a little longer. I'll skew it +0.5 for creative use of a three-tiered concept, and for giving meaning and reason for the game interface itself.

     "Zero" begins well. The setup is entertaining. It isn't especially difficult once you follow the tips in the help screen. Each success opens another option, and you only need to retrace your steps to obtain the next piece, and the next, and the next. The writing is good, but at times, it seemed the author may have been attempting to write above his own proficiency level. I could be mistaken, but from a few misused phrases and obvious sentence fragments, that was my impression. Even so, the story was entertaining, and I appreciated the humor.

     As always, skip this paragraph to avoid the bug report. A "fowl" is a bird; something "foul" is offensive or revolting. A black "suit" is on the stone? If that was intentional, I admit I've never heard the term used that way. The king's portrait was very dark on my monitor. In fact, all but a small splotch appeared black, until I clipped it into PSP and brightened it. "...like a bit farce..." -- should this be "like a big farce" or maybe "a bit farcical?" In "day end and day out", did you mean "day in..." instead? A web search shows results for either, but the latter is the form I'm familiar with. The northern ending doesn't actually end -- no score is printed after "The End", and the endgame options list does not appear.

     Numerous objects are simply unimplemented. It's easy to overlook a few, or miss every possible reference, but in "Zero" it seemed more noticeable throughout (bunkbeds, headboard, etc). This became especially evident in the northern and southern endings -- the northern ending in particular, where it seems impossible to interact with the guard at all. For that matter, I couldn't seem to interact with Zero's comrade, either. I realize and appreciate that these are just paths to the endings, but it took an interactive game and made it two-dimensional. In a way, I'm glad that a large new world didn't open up, but still, more interaction along these paths would have been welcomed. It sort of felt like the author just gave up. Prior to leaving, it's a little unclear on what you have to do. I was told to leave, yet couldn't, despite having cleaned up the place. It worked only after I took what RatFac brought and/or when I wore the three pieces of armor. I was further confused because Lambert seemed not to exist at all. "Zero" skews down a half-point because it seemed like the author lost interest in his own game.

     Then again, it could have been a rush to finish by the deadline. I definitely know the feeling, because I went through it myself. "Zero" isn't as strong as some of the other competition entries, but it isn't a bad game either. The use of graphics (love the guestbook), fonts and colors are a plus, but not enough to bump the score.

     "The Great Xavio" is a really good game. I went beyond the two hour mark by a cumulative fifteen minutes, and it was mainly because I missed one thing (the thing I needed to do at the docks). Oddly enough, I had done the same thing elsewhere, earlier, to find the (useless?) lost room key. On second thought, it might not have been useless. Had I not obtained a room of my own, the lost key might have opened the gym door. Still, what's found inside seemed to have no use. Oh well. I could go on about what-ifs for a while, including the necessity to get a room at all, when what's inside is used for only one possible solution to a puzzle. In fact, I was only able to get a room when I mistyped "cart" in asking Todd's opinion. It seems there may be two or three different ways to open the bathroom door of Xavio's suite; the point is, the author went that extra mile to make the game winnable in a variety of ways. I'm tempted to skew it +0.5 for that, but I think a flat 9.0 score is well-deserved for a very strong entry.

     If you've been thorough, you may feel like a packrat by the end of the game. It's always frustrating to have limits on what items you can carry at once, since much of the time you won't know what you need to keep on-hand. Reese imposes no such limitations in "The Great Xavio", which sacrifices realism to gain playability. Had it gone the other way, I can imagine the frustration in trying to determine what should be carried and what should be stashed away for later. Much of my ending inventory was comprised of things which either had no use, or may have been used for alternate solutions I simply didn't encounter.

     I'll list the few problems I found next (nothing to really detract from the overall experience), but first, I can't resist mentioning this any longer. Do any of you other authors notice things in each of the competition entries that tie back in some way to your own game? In just about every entry (although I haven't been keeping a complete list -- maybe I should have), some item or plot point or puzzle component is similar to something from my entry. It's actually kind of interesting to pick out what piece of the game is most like my own, and I wonder if other authors have done the same? In "The Great Xavio", a serving tray is the prime similarity. In "Identity" it was an arm/wrist device which can accept commands. One game (maybe Mingsheng) had stones "perfect for skipping." Multiple games have included card slots. "Gamlet" features a wheel that can be turned (although, if I recall, it had no purpose). Other examples aren't jumping readily to mind, but I'm sure that most of the games had other similarities.

     The writing is excellent, and the dialogue is great. Dr. Todd is quite a character. The problems I found were limited to implementation, not writing or story. An attempt to "get all" cycles through everything in a room (or at least it did where I tried it). When finding the caped man a second time, I attempted to ask Todd's opinion, and his reply was that he found the man puzzling (even though he was right there). Telling Max about the murder results in two quote marks starting his reply. These next two might be spoilers, but here goes. It's possible to enter Max's room even if the cart remains in the elevator. This leads to a couple of quirks, where Todd recommends we bring the cart with us when we leave (it isn't there), and you can direct Todd into it even if it's not there. When taking all four towels, the room description indicates towels are still on the table. When the cops go down to the first floor (it might not even be necessary for the solution), they will still "talk" in the bathroom. In the master bedroom, the bed is sometimes referred to by its object name ("MasterBedroomBed" in parenthesis) -- for example, when trying to search it. The phrase "an one thousand dollar bill" is used near the beginning, and again when looking inside the locker -- however, references to "a one dollar bill" are correct. When trying to "unlock bathroom door with (whatever)", the line "that doesn't seem to fit." Is shown immediately after the period of the prior line (I'm not sure it should be printed at all, or maybe a line break is needed). In several places, a blank line is missing after the text, before the command prompt appears ("x table" in the lobby is one example). When Todd pushes his glasses up on his nose, "x glasses" sees no such thing.

     In a game this detailed, though, a few problems are no surprise. None of these things posed a problem in winning. I only point them out in case the author is interested (like I will be) in releasing a post-comp update. Good writing makes a game much more vivid and realistic, and "The Great Xavio" succeeded wonderfully in drawing me into the game. Playing the first half later at night, when the game is set at 3:00 in the morning, probably helped. I think this game is going to do very well in the competition.

     I did misjudge it, because it's better than my first impression, but at the end, I kind of thought to myself "hmmm." It doesn't really have an ending. It ends, and in a somewhat appropriate spot, but either the author plans a sequel, or he planned to expand this game (the "readme" says the source code is lost -- tip: flash drives are cheap now). An interesting suspense thriller (with bits of gore thrown in for good measure) just kind of drops cold. The game could be a 6 or a 7 (undecided, I based it at 6.5), but the total lack of plot resolution forces me to grudgingly skew it down a full point. I know nothing about the story except that a woman was killed, the bad guys are ambiguously homosexual, and I'm a research subject. Seeing the number on my forehead was a good touch (could it have been backwards?), but just another plot point that goes unresolved.

     The writing in "Zero One" isn't bad. I liked it, in fact. This was the first indication that the game might not be the 2 or 3 or 4 that I had predicted. It seemed like a budding survival horror game was just waiting to burst through, but it never really did.

     I'm going to mix in a few opinions with the following bug report. Some of these things weren't necessarily problems or bugs, but they did seem out of place. First, having the PC scream out when kicking open the double doors didn't fit the game. In this situation, his enthusiasm should have been subdued by caution. I was able to look "in" the coffee machine, and actually take the key that way. I was unable to get a second cup of coffee; the game insisted that I hadn't finished the first one, although I had. Shell casings in the hall will result in "you see no such thing" messages. The description of the interior of the helmet makes it rather disgusting to wear. The PC passes through a kitchen on the way to the point where the helmet is necessary. It would have been nice (and an additional puzzle) if the helmet had required a good cleaning first. A typo: "...oak door leading back to out to the corridor..." (the first "to" should be removed). It would be nice to have "gray" as a synonym for "grey" (one of my beta testers made me do the inverse for my entry, and I think small extras like this can make gameplay go all the more smoothly). The description of the kitchen says the lunchbox is on the counter, even after I've taken it and dropped it elsewhere. After "getting rid of" Terry, a clue indicates (at least, it seemed to indicate) that a better and less permanent solution might be found. I tried restoring the game, to throw hot coffee at him instead. It would have been a nice touch, but no such luck. At the end, when dealing with the padlock, why can't it simply assume which object I mean? I only have one that's suited to the task.

     Perhaps one of the most frustrating problems, and it really illustrates why I received the same complaint about one of my own games in the past, is that "Zero One" asks questions when it doesn't expect an answer. What I mean is, you can't disambiguate. When asked "which X do you mean?" (maybe not the exact wording, but you get the idea) you have to resubmit the complete command. Answering the question won't work. I grant that this is very likely a limitation of the Alan parser, but it's a shame. It's true -- IF players really can become accustomed to a certain type of interface, and a lack of it seems frustrating. To anyone I may have argued with regarding my past efforts, you have my sincere apology.

     Now that I'm not holding back on pointing out the interesting coincidences between each entry and my own, I made a note. In "Zero One" the portrait on the wall is the element that most directly corresponds to something from mine (in fact, a portrait on the wall).

     I enjoyed the game, but the abrupt ending leaves it flat and unresolved. Some of the puzzles are made easier by heeding the advice from "help" -- but I still missed a few important opportunities, such as inside the armory. I had to peek at the walkthrough here (and in fact, near the beginning), but most of it was solved unassisted. "Zero One" could have been much more than it is; it's a shame that it isn't.

     Despite the low score, I did enjoy this game. At the same time, it frustrated me in places. Perhaps I'm reaching the "cranky" stage in the review process, having played twenty- three games with only fourteen more to go. It could also be that I spent almost as much time jotting down review notes as I did in actual game time. The game does have an epic feel -- epic potential, rather -- it just doesn't seem to make good use of the potential. It's an interesting story, in that you have been whisked away to a dream world of mice and gophers, where darkness threatens everything, and the forces of Good and Evil will pull you in two directions.

     If I was into drugs, I'd ask the author to share his secret. As it happens, I am not.

     The game is trippy. It's supposed to be trippy, but at the same time, isn't it supposed to make sense -- even if sense is injected later? I got the impression that the author had a change of plans two or three times during development, perhaps getting motivation and inspiration from other sources not originally part of the design. The irony is, it's a great concept. I haven't played anything like it. It's an experience, that's for sure. It deserves a full-point upward skew, but from a base of 4.5 (I was very tempted to base it at 5.0, but I was just as tempted to base it a point lower, hence the split), it still doesn't come in as strongly as many of the prior games I've played.

     The following section -- an enormous paragraph -- are the problems I noted. The word "to" is missing in "...from here you get have two choices." The line "...doesn't that sound weird." should end with a question mark. The "es" is missing from "possesses" in "...flashlight possess a great ability." Attempting to drop anything or show anything (to anybody) results in "[TADS-1014: 'abort' statement executed]" (I noticed it first, when trying to drop the mirror when I had the notion it might save me from the gophers). Add a space between "a" and "long" in "...quite along time now..." What are "diverse people groups"? The word "simply" has a typo in which the "y" is a "t" instead. Mary claims that the people at the bar are friendly, but she says so when they've been entirely the opposite. Attempting to climb the staircase says "...don't see any staircase here." I was able to get into the room with the herbs without the key. As a result, I received only one brandy (perhaps when I followed through for the second one, I didn't get it because I already had the first). However, even though I was told that I could exhale only once, I was able to exhale again without having another (found out through the walkthrough -- I didn't even try it later, because I didn't expect it to work -- and didn't have a second brandy). The puzzle with the sixteen cabinets can be cheated with "undo" fairly easily (no way around it since you can also save, aside from changing the nature of the puzzle). Too many UNDOs at the ICE cannon inverted the color scheme to black on white. With the yellow glowstick, wouldn't the red room turn purple? I was previously unable to shine glowsticks at things previously, which trained me to not even attempt it at the point where it worked (the hints file helped). I figured out the colored cabinets puzzle with only the three hints given, but it's another that's just as easy with UNDO. Although I sometimes do it myself (I shouldn't), it's generally bad to end a sentence with a preposition, as in "...to get to that bar you were at." (I suggest simplifying it as simply "...to return to the bar.") Once you obtain the crystal, the stairway becomes "a very very boring place." My only complaint there is that I don't want to BE in a boring place.

     These last three things aren't so much bugs or issues, as simply things that struck me as being out of place. First, the sudden death issue was probably more prominent in "A Light's Tale" than in any other COMP '04 entry I've yet to play. To reach the end, I used UNDO like it was a puzzle in itself, and I ultimately made ten different saves along the way, reverting back to one or another as I went (if not to buy more time before dying, then to review prior text for clues). I would suggest that instead of death, the player is sent back to a central location; it provides a penalty, but should save a little on frustration. Second, near the end, I was saved by the one NPC that upset me the most (I don't know how many times I tried giving flasgarry to the bar's owner -- I hadn't yet found the dying plant -- before resorting to the hints file for an answer). In short, it was impossible for me (as the player) to share in the PC's remorse. Lastly, the intro states that everything in the game is free, except the ideas. At the risk of launching a copyright debate, the ideas in a game are the one thing that you can't own. That's why copyright works. Otherwise, nobody could write about much of anything, because (as someone once said, long ago -- think biblical), "there is nothing new under the sun." An expression in fixed form -- your game, the representation of the characters, even the plot (if you can make a case of it) are the sole property of the author. The ideas... not so much.

     That concludes my notes. To reiterate, I liked this game, despite the problems. With some work (to the puzzles, to the story, to some of the writing), it could be a really great game. I hate to end on a negative note, but since this review won't be posted until all judges have already submitted final scores anyway, I suppose the harm is minimal. "A Light's Tale", for all that it could be, will be a low-ranker. You have a wonderful imagination, VBNZ. I think with a little more time, we'll see better examples of your work.

     The author was concerned that the game might not be winnable in two hours, but I managed it well enough (without going to the website for hints, until after I had won). The clues given when you die make it possible to try, try again. In any other setting, this might be a problem -- a game should be winnable without relying on post mortem clues, right? However, even though it doesn't directly tie into the story, it's easy to make it fit, with a little imagination. I also liked that "undo" works (as always), but isn't necessarily a cure-all to puzzle-solving. It's difficult to cite examples without spoiling the game.

     In this game, it is possible to get stuck. It's possible to save in any number of unwinnable situations. It's possible to die -- repeatedly. But, aside from the frustration of it (which simply serves as motivation, at least for this game), it works. I had to restart four times, and I reloaded even more prior saves. The author does a good job of making logical puzzles, although much of it does rely on the experience of prior attempts.

     The author's website mentions the "enter door" missing object bug, so I won't go into detail about that ("undo" fixes it). I was able to lock the Deutsch lab door with the key found inside, even though I didn't have to unlock it to begin with (this will make more sense when you play to that point). The "get all" commands seems to cycle through everything -- I see this quite a bit in other games, too. The word "is" is missing from "...prototype itself a six foot..." When I'm racing the clock, it would be nice if certain commands didn't count against me (for instance, "about" takes up time) -- Hugo calls these "xverbs". When putting batteries into the flashlight, it seems they're loaded into the one on the bench instead of the one in your inventory (again, you have to get there to understand it) -- easily worked around by leaving the room first, or (probably) by taking the other with you. One situation that wasn't handled is that I left the light on in the first floor maintenance room, and presumably it would have been noticed during my lengthy wait at the balcony window (I'm positive the light was switched on before the alarm).

     My solution was a little different than the walkthrough. I actually made the alarm work to my advantage, and it made for a long wait followed by a quick follow-up with no time at all to spare. I should have started a transcript on it -- it's an interesting alternative.

     With some of the entries, I have tried to predict how well the game will do overall. I really enjoyed "All Things Devours", but my suspicion is that it's going to frustrate many of the real judges. I hope enough of them are able to stick it out and think it through, because I believe this game deserves a high ranking in the results.

     FOLLOW-UP: I emailed the author, and he pointed out that some of the problems I found weren't really problems. In particular, I didn't need to turn out the light in the first floor maintenance room, because I didn't turn it on the second time. Also, I confused one key for the other, forgetting that the key to the lab was already in my inventory at the start of the game. It's a complex game, and I fault myself for making these errors.

     You may be thinking "what does any of that have to do with The Big Scoop?" Well... nothing, directly, but playing this game reminded me of why I liked these games to begin with. These days, since I haven't played regularly in years, it's easy to forget how fun adventure games can be. I'm usually distracted by one thing or another. It isn't easy to sit down and focus on the playing and the reading and the solving, and I think this detracts from the enjoyment. In "The Big Scoop", some of this came back to me. The puzzles felt like achievements, and I needed the hints in only two or three areas.

     The game does have a few problems, but as I continue to work on a post-comp follow-up to mine, it becomes more difficult for me to weigh these factors into the score (I cringe to think how poorly it'll place, now that I'm up to fifty-four bugs and typos in the competition version, including one or two that are obscure but substantial). But, this is a review of "The Big Scoop" -- sorry for straying from the topic not once, but twice now.

     The game has an interesting (if frustrating) beginning, in which you play as an eventual NPC, only becoming the "main character" after making an escape. Maybe it has been done before -- I'd be surprised, otherwise -- but it seemed clever and original to me. The introduction isn't difficult, but it seems that way at first. It's harder because your time is limited. I had to reload and restart several times (I lost count) before gaining a good enough understanding of the events to make an escape.

     I managed this part without the walkthrough or hints, but this is where things get weird. Because the game seemed to be in a no-win situation later, I had to restart and do something a little differently. However, what I did the first time wouldn't work. I swear it did the first time -- I may have let my lack of attention see phantom bugs in "All Things Devours", but I'm pretty sure on this one. I opened the wardrobe, went inside, closed it, and waited. When I exited, I was able to leave through the front door. This isn't how the walkthrough goes. I can understand multiple solutions, but I simply could not get the same thing to work when I restarted. I tried multiple times, and the length time I waited (Z'd) never seemed to matter. I'd be caught upon leaving the wardrobe. It's as if this was never supposed to work to begin with -- but I promise, it did.

     I had to restart, however, because the game seemed to be in a no-win state. In several other games, I've missed a clue or an item because I wasn't thorough. So, I have a policy to do more searching now -- even before there is reason to feel stuck. Much of the time, it works -- I'm rewarded with something I would probably have missed. So, when I found something in the apartment, I felt like I was already ahead of the game.

     Later, you're required (as the main character) to return to the apartment to find this very thing. The problem for me was, it wasn't there. I tried for a while, even searching outside the apartment in what seemed to be a likely place, but no luck. I referred to the walkthrough at this point. What I found was, I was supposed to have escaped the apartment using an alternate method. My guess is, because I didn't, Linda kept the item, but since that was never supposed to happen, the story continues as if the search is still necessary. Only, it isn't there to be found. I restarted, escaped as instructed by the walkthrough, and that solved it. I tried once with the item in inventory, too, and it was lost a second time (the author did anticipate that, and it seems to be handled). I didn't continue down that route, so it's possible the item might have turned up in another place. Instead, I made sure not to touch the item at all during the path I continued, so I would have no doubt as to its location when I arrived back at that point in the game.

     From there, everything went fine, until I was stuck trying to open a door using the four- digit code supplied by Linda. I just wasn't sure if this was another loophole, or if I was supposed to find an alternate solution. I checked the walkthrough, and confirmed the latter. It was a clever puzzle; I wish I had tried a little longer on it before assuming the worst. And, from there, I reached the end (with a full 100 points, no less) without additional hints or walkthrough-peeks. I admit, I came close when we became locked in the cellar. Somehow, I figured it out, and kudos to the author on a short but good puzzle.

     I found a few other problems, which I mention as a means (as always) of providing feedback to the author for use in an updated version. The phrase "...a eight year..." should use "an" instead. When pressing numbers one at a time (at the door to the corridor), the "1" in my code would not work because the game assumed I was talking about "one" (as a quantity) of the last item I referenced (in other words, "Press 1" will say "(the door) It is fixed in place."). Thinking early on that part of the solution was to turn off the phone, I tried it. The message in reply says the phone is already off, but it couldn't have been, since it was ringing. It would be nice if "keys" was a synonym for the key ring, since you don't need to refer to them individually anyway. When trying to look at anything inside the wardrobe while the door is closed, the message (giving the definition of "darkness") should be reworded -- "an absence of light to see by" just seems awkward. I tried to call 911. The game thought I was trying to call myself. Havin